[Stillwater]

^ wow wtf man. why is the S in your sig twice as big as the other letters... s... S

[skatensurf]

it's a capital S

[mindtrix34]

Originally Posted by Stillwater

^ wow wtf man. why is the S in your sig twice as big as the other letters... s... S

Lets calm down. Fix the proportion as said.

[Stillwater]

Well boys, i gotta hand it to ya. After taking away the colons, quotation marks, underlines, and making all the letters the same size, lining them up, and getting rid of the fancy lookin letters... I must say, you've turned me into a true writer. I think i can take this one to the streets.

/sarcasm


Any other steps now?

[Carva]

Originally Posted by (H‡TTING‡R)

well you and skatensurf arre talking abotu completely diff things.
at first i thought he was talkign abotu something else, but now i agree it is all technically vndailsm, but your talking about if its art or not...
thats a completely diff story

Are you just illiterate or are you a complete fucking moron? I never said or implied that graf isn't art..

Originally Posted by Graffer

Yeah I don't think any writer will say its not vandalism (unless you hit legal walls, which in my opinion makes you a pussy)

Hittin legal walls isn't for pussies, I mean.. mostly it is but it's the opportunity for good writers to paint more complex and intricate pieces..

[(H‡TTING‡R)]

Originally Posted by Carva

... since when do you have to be an artist to tell if something is art or not? ..
I'm not even trying to have his back here but but youre stupid as fuck

i never said or implied you said that lmao. you said you could tell whats art and whats not. and no, if you dont know shit about the scene, you cant tell.
how long have you been writing? so fuck off, or better yet learn something about graffiti before you post in this thread again.

[Stillwater]

so...

[(H‡TTING‡R)]

^well not just put ur letters closer to each other, and keep writing the same thing over and over until you find a new way to do a letter

[pain.]

just some shit i got bored with

[(H‡TTING‡R)]

well you got the right idea, the top of your s in the simple is pretty nice, not a fan of the bottom tho.
tag looks like your kind of going for a philly but not really

[ZeroOrDie.]

Originally Posted by Stillwater

so...

choose a brand new word

the letters p-m-e-k do not look good together

[pain.]

yeah i was kinda fucked up the other night and just went with it.
thanks though for the crit

[(H‡TTING‡R)]

hm lets see if i have any pieces of mine from back when i had a diff name that i wont get in trouble with


haha this was back when i was first experimenting with shading back in early winter


some roller

[Carva]

Originally Posted by (H‡TTING‡R)

i never said or implied you said that lmao. you said you could tell whats art and whats not. and no, if you dont know shit about the scene, you cant tell.
how long have you been writing? so fuck off, or better yet learn something about graffiti before you post in this thread again.

I just re-read your post and I thought you said "you're talking about it as if it's not art".. bare in mind I only really browse sb-c when I'm stoned so my bad for misreading but stop being such a defensive cock sucking faggot, of course I can tell if it's art or not, or if it's an attempt at art at the very least, anyone can tell that, unless they're a close-minded, ignorant twat, whether I write or not has nothing to do with it.. you don't have to be a writer to tell whether it's art or not, so get the fuck off of your high-horse and stop being a little bitch about it..

Any piece or tag or whatever on a property that isn't yours, is vandalism, unless you have consent of the property owner.. doesn't matter if it's an amazing piece, it very well might be art but it doesn't change the fact that it's vandalism, I mean.. I really don't give a fuck, I'm just making my point.

[iWriteOnWalls]

Originally Posted by Stillwater

Well boys, i gotta hand it to ya. After taking away the colons, quotation marks, underlines, and making all the letters the same size, lining them up, and getting rid of the fancy lookin letters... I must say, you've turned me into a true writer. I think i can take this one to the streets.

/sarcasm


Any other steps now?

Dude you need to add style to your letters. Just start messing around the shape with the letters. Watch videos get inspired. And don't space out your letters put them closer together. Practice writing the alphabet.

Stay up,
Minus

[almost]

My first attempt ever I have been lurking this page for a little while and figured I would try it out. Critique and remember. Yeah whatever I suck.




EDIT- Just noticed I missed some 3d on the k and the bottom of the second e, my bad.

[skatensurf]

i see no picture in your post...

[skatensurf]

nope

you need to host it on imageshack or something that's not gmail

[almost]

Can you see it in my first post now? it's on imageshack.

[mindtrix34]

Originally Posted by almost

My first attempt ever I have been lurking this page for a little while and figured I would try it out. Critique and remember. Yeah whatever I suck.




EDIT- Just noticed I missed some 3d on the k and the bottom of the second e, my bad.

leek, yes?
Keep the E's either lower case or upper case, it would look better that way. Your letters are sorts of different sizes, lets keep them proportional with one another.

[almost]

Originally Posted by mindtrix34

leek, yes?
Keep the E's either lower case or upper case, it would look better that way. Your letters are sorts of different sizes, lets keep them proportional with one another.

Allright, thanks for the feedback. Also, yes it is leek and I was feeling weird about having them be upper and lower case. Are you talking about the width of the letters, height or both?

[mindtrix34]

Originally Posted by almost

Allright, thanks for the feedback. Also, yes it is leek and I was feeling weird about having them be upper and lower case. Are you talking about the width of the letters, height or both?

Both.

[almost]

Ok I will try that later.