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07-11-2006, 09:14 PM
i was pissed about somethin so i wrote this

plottin and plannin ways just to mess with my flow/
like a stingy drug dealer addin grass to tha dro/
im like the chronic and that shady bitch is orageno/
tha hoe is on the shortbus's sittin in the last row/
i cant be mad shes like the bay- comin at me extra dumb/
shes useless to me like a beat with no drum/
white rappin like eminem but you know im not shady/
not retaliating even if she keeps on hating/
she cant affect my life but i know i can affect hers/
ill say one thing and she busts out hatefull words/
because in truth she cant say what she fells/
cause she wont be real and will never reveal/
whats really goin on and why shes tryin do me wrong/
cause im gettin her friends while shes singin a solo song/
id rather be acapella then witha bitch shady as a undercover/
that acts like a friend but really wants to fuck ya/
im tired of the deciet and tired of the lies/
cause i can see through it like an invisible disguise/
i always suspected but now i have proof/
like makaveli ressurected i always come back with tha truth/
cause no mater what she cant kill what ive been tryin to do/
thinkin shes smart but really she has no clue/

07-11-2006, 09:31 PM
I thought this was going to be like. I can fell the evil strecth across streight thoruough my veins. i could't die untill i realize etc. got that off of a song. But I thought this was going to be about emo and goth shit. No offense to you Valo.

07-12-2006, 10:53 AM
the fact that you put "dro" in there, it takes out any seriousness in it.

07-12-2006, 09:13 PM
why is that?

skater danny
07-12-2006, 09:14 PM
Yeah, what is "dro"?

07-12-2006, 10:10 PM

woop tang
07-12-2006, 10:13 PM
pretty good.

07-13-2006, 06:09 PM
yeah, id read it if you'd said Pete Doherty or Bob Dylan or Neil Young or Jack White wrote it, but nah