View Full Version : Is are music bad,ok, or dope?

06-01-2014, 06:14 PM
[/URL]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QlrTSlb4ABY (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QlrTSlb4ABY)
We’re a teenage, hip-hop collective out of New Jersey, by the name TrapBang. We do everything ourselves, with no budget or help, from producing, to videos. If you like the song check out our EP we just released it today.
[url]http://trapbangorfry.bandcamp.com/album/the-disjointed-ep (http://trapbangorfry.bandcamp.com/album/the-disjointed-ep)

Vlad the Conqueror
06-01-2014, 07:09 PM

Vlad the Conqueror
06-01-2014, 07:11 PM
no comma after New Jersey

no comma after producing

add a comma after "like the song"

Either add a period after EP or delete "it" in that last sentence

didn't click on any links