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Spyro
08-27-2012, 01:10 PM
Not serious. Just made a demo.
Recorded it with a mac book.
Extremely mediocre imo.
Other then the fact that I sound extremely white, what do you think?
I was thinking about making a full song but I dunno.

Make Pretend - 2012 - YouTube (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h-morWE7fLU)

carrow
08-27-2012, 01:17 PM
whitest boy you ever seen... true


try to make your voice sound lower

Spyro
08-27-2012, 01:42 PM
whitest boy you ever seen... true


try to make your voice sound lower

I can't :(
If I did it'd be completely noticeable I was doing it on purpose haha.

kinjjibo
08-27-2012, 05:40 PM
You said the n-word:0

Spyro
08-27-2012, 05:46 PM
You said the n-word:0

uhhhh... it's cool... I have black friends.. or something.

kinjjibo
08-27-2012, 05:47 PM
Oh, if you put it that way, it's perfectly acceptable.

Nigga.

Spyro
08-27-2012, 05:54 PM
SPYRO AND KINJJIBO
Niggas fo lyfe.

theInfested
08-27-2012, 06:07 PM
NGL it's alright. I wouldn't put it on my mp3 and jam, but good enough for a second listen.

Spyro
08-27-2012, 06:10 PM
NGL it's alright. I wouldn't put it on my mp3 and jam, but good enough for a second listen.

That works for me man. Thanks. I wouldn't jam it either lol. I was just trying to get a concept to see if people would like it. If enough people do i'm gonna try to record a legit one.

theInfested
08-27-2012, 06:11 PM
Might as well go for a legit one anyway. Unless it costs money.

dutch madman
09-05-2012, 11:56 AM
Just do it.

However, i'd like to add you should try to stop pitching up your voice on the syllables if that makes sense. I mean, if it's your thing, do it, but i feel as if you're trying to add focus on those words.

Example

''For realness
the illness
has got me feeling like im
JADED
or maybe i'm probably just WAITING
'till i can say I made it''

Flow's pretty good there, but you pitch at jaded and waiting, which somewhat deminishes the other bars.


Just my two cents though, good effort anyhow.

Spyro
09-11-2012, 05:06 PM
Just do it.

However, i'd like to add you should try to stop pitching up your voice on the syllables if that makes sense. I mean, if it's your thing, do it, but i feel as if you're trying to add focus on those words.

Example

''For realness
the illness
has got me feeling like im
JADED
or maybe i'm probably just WAITING
'till i can say I made it''

Flow's pretty good there, but you pitch at jaded and waiting, which somewhat deminishes the other bars.


Just my two cents though, good effort anyhow.

I know what you mean. I was just trying out different styles with vocal patterns haha. Thanks a lot though. I just finished writing a new rap so I'll probably record it soon.