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Skateselect
06-21-2011, 06:28 PM
the way i wanted it to sound when i originally "wrote" it. the bridge is much more cohesive, and most importantly its on an acoustic guitar (my friend's classical guitar) as opposed to on my electric.

Enjoy

YouTube - ‪Nights Beyond the Dream‬‏ (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ond0dvgIJI)


here's the first version i uploaded

YouTube - ‪Nights Beyond the Dream (take 2)[final]‬‏ (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LJaHojYmtcQ)


i think the difference is clear

treflippers!
06-21-2011, 07:04 PM
really nice man, good work. I think it got a little boring and repetative after a while though. something needs to come in or change up after a bit ya know? still good though, it was nice and calming.

riskitforabiscuit
06-21-2011, 07:09 PM
That was really cool man, but I agree with treflippers a bit. Maybe add a simple bass track or another guitar.

Skateselect
06-21-2011, 07:14 PM
yeah i have a serious problem with making repetitive music. its hard for me to add stuff, because when i have a song like this that i have completely figured out before i record it i cant really imagine adding other stuff to it by the time i get around to recording it.

Videon
06-21-2011, 07:35 PM
I think some vocals by Steve Walsh would make this REALLY good. Your stuff is always pretty good, but sounds bland without someone singing. I'm all about instrumentals, I'm a guitarist, but for some reason I want to hear some singing on a song of yours.