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millerbestmedia
03-04-2009, 03:08 AM
I know that this is in the wrong section, but I also know that no-one will watch and critique it if its in off topic videos.

what do you think of the editing?
Of course its a different editing style to skatin cause its bodyboarding, but still, what do you think in general?

http://www.vimeo.com/2903367

jonples
03-04-2009, 04:48 AM
i liked the way it was put together, but not the titles they were kinda gay SUPER TIGHT ARTISTIC EDITING, ZOMG THE MOVIE SO GOOD .

UnitedScum
03-04-2009, 09:45 AM
You have some decent footage I guess (body boarding ain't my thang) but the titles killed it...

boodige
03-04-2009, 02:14 PM
i liked the way it was put together, but not the titles they were kinda gay SUPER TIGHT ARTISTIC EDITING, ZOMG THE MOVIE SO GOOD .

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CTskater94
03-04-2009, 02:16 PM
take out most of the titles. who cares how long you've been filming?

millerbestmedia
03-04-2009, 10:22 PM
yeh I guess bodyboarding editing is different in relation to skating (in regards to the titles).

its fairly common in bodyboarding editing to do use those types of titles, and people do care how long youve been filming. It makes a big difference. It's different with skating cause theres no like seasons that make different waves work, and so a movie that says "2 years in the making" indicates a variety of footage and different waves, rather than if its filmed over 6 months which would feature mostly the same waves. Get it?

But yeh, I guess just comment on the composition and editing in regards to the music and the colour correcting and stuff like that.