moontage

[Soap McTavish]

crit.
http://vimeo.com/2975830

[wwpskater69]

1st clip was mad shaky and had no general composition,
2nd didnt really get how big the gap was, so i guess closer
3rd i like
4th was good , coulda been steadier
5th the bars were maaaaaad distracting
6th good
7th the line was good, coulda been a bit steadier
8th jittery with the landing, fix that.
9th coulda been better if he was closer i guess
10th i dont like how he cam into frame
11th proper son
12th might as well have gone back to the tree, pointless to zoom out

[Soap McTavish]

haha thanks.

[jimarzee]

i loved the song and that 360 was nice and beutiful filming to go with it :)