Crit

[Soap McTavish]

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http://vimeo.com/2540080

[Dillbert]

smoother shots, use the rule of thirds more, dont cut off heads, and on some of the shots in the beginning u kind of would jerk the camera around for no reason. most of these things should be fairly obvious to u.

[Soap McTavish]

smoother shots, use the rule of thirds more, dont cut off heads, and on some of the shots in the beginning u kind of would jerk the camera around for no reason. most of these things should be fairly obvious to u.
what parts were the jerking occuring?
the rail?

[Dillbert]

:15 tranny line

[pmskate721]

realllyyyyy jerky.
but the angles were good and the editing was good too

[Soap McTavish]

:15 tranny line
ya

[wwpskater69]

really shaky and jerky, smooth that shit out a bit. also, try not to cut off feet, if anything cut off their heads

[Soap McTavish]

really shaky and jerky, smooth that shit out a bit. also, try not to cut off feet, if anything cut off their heads
??

[toomanykickflips]

like its been said, jerky. when you were filming towards the light it looked as though your lens was a little smudged, and did you exposure change on the rail, or was it on auto? either way those were really smooth exposure changes, if you did them, props.