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RageAgainstTheToyMachine
09-22-2008, 01:58 PM
I wrote this today. I've been working heavily on my arpeggios and everything lately. Heres what I wrote. Only took a couple of hours.

Opinions/critique/comments?

http://media.putfile.com/DuelArpeggios

i_don't_know
09-22-2008, 02:00 PM
Holy SHIT.


Get some vocals up in dat bitch.

kag123
09-22-2008, 02:04 PM
Arghh, not loading up for me..

EDIT: It's pretty sweet. A little slow for my tastes, but much better than I can do..

Is that drumming a program or actually someone drumming?

B-Dawg
09-22-2008, 02:06 PM
hly fucking shit

i_don't_know
09-22-2008, 02:08 PM
Now all you need is some tapping to speed it up a bit, and it will be epic and then some.

RageAgainstTheToyMachine
09-22-2008, 02:12 PM
Arghh, not loading up for me..

EDIT: It's pretty sweet. A little slow for my tastes, but much better than I can do..

Is that drumming a program or actually someone drumming?

I want to speed it up, and I will when I can. This is just a rough version, I will improve it a shit load because it is kind of sloppy at some parts.

The reason I didn't speed it up is because the 2nd guitar part is a BITCH to play, it took my so many takes to get it just to what you heard. The string skipping on it is frustrating.

I use Sony ACID to record, the drum part is on a content disk that came with the program.

Videon
09-22-2008, 03:23 PM
That was really nice.
Kinda reminds me of rocker206.

baker_skater
09-22-2008, 03:26 PM
Pretty good, I liked it slow it's relaxing and I like it without lyrics.

d-ville skater
09-22-2008, 03:29 PM
I liked it. The mixing of the guitar was better then I expect. In fact, Ive never heard your music before.

Gibson_SG
09-22-2008, 03:44 PM
i like it.

it would be sick if you speed it up and made it a solo in a song

NotoriousBigBird
09-22-2008, 04:24 PM
pretty ill indeed

Taaffe
09-22-2008, 04:33 PM
sick

Ynot
09-22-2008, 06:33 PM
pretty good, especially with harmonizing the guitars. your songwriting is really coming along, luke.

skate4life1
09-22-2008, 06:36 PM
I liked it.

Tony
09-23-2008, 02:24 AM
That's really nice, I would've ended it with the last note descending instead of ascending but adding more elements to that I could hear it being fucking awesome.

riskitforabiscuit
09-23-2008, 03:06 AM
Ash and I will have our new power metal song about Malcolm in the Middle recorded in about a week, maybe earlier. Brace yourselves for metal awesomeness.

Turboz
09-23-2008, 06:28 AM
good job.

kristian
09-23-2008, 01:17 PM
mannn that was sick haha.

sounds pretty trippy, loved it.

Marevix
09-23-2008, 04:14 PM
Sounds a bit awkward to me. I don't know what you guys are talking about, I'm a bit disappointed myself.

musicxskater911
09-24-2008, 05:03 PM
that was really hot. i dont know how many times ive listened to it but i just cant stop. its hypnotic. i love it. i bet it would sound really hardcore sped up but i love it the way it is =]