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brianj91
03-03-2008, 09:46 PM
if you have written a song post it up. it dosnt matter whether it be rap or rock or just whatever you wrote.

i want to see the diversity of peoples creativity on sbc.

Roboman
03-04-2008, 01:56 AM
You mean lyrics or recordings or tabs or what?

brianj91
03-04-2008, 12:49 PM
You mean lyrics or recordings or tabs or what?

no i mean song. if you wrote a song it would include tabs, lyrics etc.

Roboman
03-04-2008, 03:53 PM
OK, I was wondering what people would actually post here. If its in text form or links to mp3's or whatever.

skatetilldeath
03-04-2008, 05:44 PM
i blow at writing music but ill post it anyway. its about a sick relative btw.

Cancer
Don’t go away from me
Slipping through my frail fingers
Radiation therapy
You just want to pull the trigger

Exhaustion coming over you
Sleeping your life away
I would do anything to save you
But there is nothing I can do

Your lungs are black
Burning like charcoal
While I stare at you
Your eyes still sparkle
All these people tell you lies
I going to miss you if you die

You lay in bed oxygen low
All you want is to go home
You look around at the shadows around you
Everyone is worried about you

As you watch the room go black…

Ynot
03-04-2008, 07:01 PM
i had to write this for my music tech class. It's pretty much about a girl i liked:


She came in so quick
I didn't know what to say,
But then just as quick,
She had to go away
Now she's gone
Out of my life
Just like that

I still think about her,
About what could've been
How my life would've changed
If she just stayed a couple more
Days

I still think about the one that got away

Oh wait, who is that?
Yes, she's off in the distance
This is my chance,
Oh I'd better not miss it,
To see her again
Wait, I have to think of something to say

RageAgainstTheToyMachine
03-04-2008, 08:33 PM
What about music writing?

If so..

www.myspace.com/lukemusicianprofile
www.myspace.com/darkrieg
www.myspace.com/ratskullthrash

wrote all of em.

I'll post some random lyrics I've written for former projects later.

brianj91
03-04-2008, 09:50 PM
What about music writing?

If so..

www.myspace.com/lukemusicianprofile
www.myspace.com/darkrieg
www.myspace.com/ratskullthrash

wrote all of em.

I'll post some random lyrics I've written for former projects later.

all of that was actually good i thought.

and to skatetilldeath i thought it was good.

and to ynot it was good also but kinda strange thing to write a song about.

none of it sucked i think that skatetilldeaths was better but just my opinion. and as i liked all your stuff rattm

skatetilldeath
03-05-2008, 07:11 AM
^why thank you

RageAgainstTheToyMachine
03-05-2008, 07:18 AM
SYSTMATIC DESTRUCTION

Systematic Destruction
The walls are closing in
Let abuse begin
On your plans for us
The voices you destroy
Begin to multiply
And you blindly listen
People are figuring out
Sytematic destruction
Life and death obduction
Born by blood
Raised by a knife
Master destroyer
Decapitated cadavers
Run through your mind
Bringing pleasure unto what is pain

And with thy blood I form a pack
With my hate, I will attack
Severed limbs will build your nation
Welcomed demonic infestation
Leaving no soul left to defend
Your mercyless power will see no end

Inhale the darkness we abide in
Politicians close us off from all reality
Divide us in half
Divided we drown in a pool of blood
Systematic Destruction
Bloodshot gore abortion
Abort the young, imprison the old
All under slavery
Master Destroyer
Destruction left down every path
No escape from fatal riots
Paranoia adopting your mind
Great executioner
Worship the dead strapped to the chair
Corruption is your master
No regret, only a hunger for more

And with thy blood I form a pack
With my hate, I will attack
Severed limbs will build your nation
Welcomed demonic infestation
Leaving no soul left to defend
Your mercyless power will see no end

Seek your victims with corporate eyes
Build your bombs, infest your lies
Burn our bodies, slice our throats
Make us bleed your stolen votes
Pollute our minds, infect our soul
Sever whatever stands as whole
Take our lives and plan attacks
Count the dead which lie in stacks

And with thy blood I form a pack
With my hate, I will attack
Severed limbs will build your nation
Welcomed demonic infestation
Leaving no soul left to defend
Your mercyless power will see no end

Tony
03-05-2008, 09:46 AM
Rattm you wrote all the music in all those links? That's very good, I like the acoustic stuff, and Egypticide sounds cool.

Here's some of my progressive metal, it doesn't have much key changes or changing time signatures yet, but I'm working on improving my songwriting.

http://rapidshare.com/files/97289979/1cup.rar.html <-- gp5
http://rapidshare.com/files/97290781/1cup.mid.html <-- midi
Some old stuff

http://rapidshare.com/files/97290329/SB-C.rar.html <-- gp5
http://rapidshare.com/files/97290863/SB-C.mid.html <-- midi
Something I'm working on for SB-C band, Marevix you can now download it without link expiring I think.

skatetilldeath
03-05-2008, 10:39 AM
i honestly think when i wrote this that i didnt try very hard but whatever

i hope this pill makes you ckoke

grab your pills and grab your water
this evil god damn anger starter
back up he might explode
as his heart starts to corrode


while you pain ends mine just starts
evil words and broken hearts
you are triggering my homicidal thoughts
the pills are sliding down your throught
o please god just let him choke


he acts like it never happened
oh my god please let me stab him
not allowed to say a word
or his internal hell might be disturbed

the only pain is in your mind
look around your family is crying
deep inide your heart is dying

not capable of real feelings
evil words with evil meanings

(i still havent really finished it)

skatetilldeath
03-05-2008, 10:42 AM
SYSTMATIC DESTRUCTION

Systematic Destruction
The walls are closing in
Let abuse begin
On your plans for us
The voices you destroy
Begin to multiply
And you blindly listen
People are figuring out
Sytematic destruction
Life and death obduction
Born by blood
Raised by a knife
Master destroyer
Decapitated cadavers
Run through your mind
Bringing pleasure unto what is pain

And with thy blood I form a pack
With my hate, I will attack
Severed limbs will build your nation
Welcomed demonic infestation
Leaving no soul left to defend
Your mercyless power will see no end

Inhale the darkness we abide in
Politicians close us off from all reality
Divide us in half
Divided we drown in a pool of blood
Systematic Destruction
Bloodshot gore abortion
Abort the young, imprison the old
All under slavery
Master Destroyer
Destruction left down every path
No escape from fatal riots
Paranoia adopting your mind
Great executioner
Worship the dead strapped to the chair
Corruption is your master
No regret, only a hunger for more

And with thy blood I form a pack
With my hate, I will attack
Severed limbs will build your nation
Welcomed demonic infestation
Leaving no soul left to defend
Your mercyless power will see no end

Seek your victims with corporate eyes
Build your bombs, infest your lies
Burn our bodies, slice our throats
Make us bleed your stolen votes
Pollute our minds, infect our soul
Sever whatever stands as whole
Take our lives and plan attacks
Count the dead which lie in stacks

And with thy blood I form a pack
With my hate, I will attack
Severed limbs will build your nation
Welcomed demonic infestation
Leaving no soul left to defend
Your mercyless power will see no end

damn thats impressive

brianj91
03-05-2008, 11:27 AM
SYSTMATIC DESTRUCTION

Systematic Destruction
The walls are closing in
Let abuse begin
On your plans for us
The voices you destroy
Begin to multiply
And you blindly listen
People are figuring out
Sytematic destruction
Life and death obduction
Born by blood
Raised by a knife
Master destroyer
Decapitated cadavers
Run through your mind
Bringing pleasure unto what is pain

And with thy blood I form a pack
With my hate, I will attack
Severed limbs will build your nation
Welcomed demonic infestation
Leaving no soul left to defend
Your mercyless power will see no end

Inhale the darkness we abide in
Politicians close us off from all reality
Divide us in half
Divided we drown in a pool of blood
Systematic Destruction
Bloodshot gore abortion
Abort the young, imprison the old
All under slavery
Master Destroyer
Destruction left down every path
No escape from fatal riots
Paranoia adopting your mind
Great executioner
Worship the dead strapped to the chair
Corruption is your master
No regret, only a hunger for more

And with thy blood I form a pack
With my hate, I will attack
Severed limbs will build your nation
Welcomed demonic infestation
Leaving no soul left to defend
Your mercyless power will see no end

Seek your victims with corporate eyes
Build your bombs, infest your lies
Burn our bodies, slice our throats
Make us bleed your stolen votes
Pollute our minds, infect our soul
Sever whatever stands as whole
Take our lives and plan attacks
Count the dead which lie in stacks

And with thy blood I form a pack
With my hate, I will attack
Severed limbs will build your nation
Welcomed demonic infestation
Leaving no soul left to defend
Your mercyless power will see no end

i really thought this was good. excellent actually.

and to tony i wasnt able to hear your stuff.

and i liked your first one better skatetilldeath.

once i finish some of the lyrics to a song of mine ill put it up.

skatetilldeath
03-05-2008, 11:35 AM
i really thought this was good. excellent actually.

and to tony i wasnt able to hear your stuff.

and i liked your first one better skatetilldeath.

once i finish some of the lyrics to a song of mine ill put it up.

ya the second one kinda sucked ass ill put a better one up later

Tony
03-05-2008, 11:38 AM
and to tony i wasnt able to hear your stuff.

How come, I even uploaded midi-files.

skatetilldeath
03-05-2008, 11:39 AM
^ ya dude i wasnt either

brianj91
03-05-2008, 11:43 AM
How come, I even uploaded midi-files.

i don't know my computers kinda screwed.

and to skatetilldeath i don't think that your second one sucked, just wasnt as good as the first one.

and to rage against the toy machine could you post any of the tabs to some of the songs you have up.

Tony
03-05-2008, 11:43 AM
^ ya dude i wasnt either

Why's that, won't the midi-files play in your music players?

skatetilldeath
03-05-2008, 11:44 AM
^no'm